I was focusing on being a communicator and being able to share my ideas through writing. I used a lot of similie to paint a picture for my reader. I used interesting sentence starters to engage my reader too. To help me describe my creature I used some alliteration. I hope you enjoy my description of my Ancient Creature
Next timed to be even better I am going to add more description to my writing so people can understand what I want to picture in their head.
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